Chapters 11: All the
Angst
The
next morning, Jennifer is at the practice rink, in the conference room, in
order to get some work done. Her little sister, Julia, the one whose bullying
experience is driving Jennifer to get funding to make the documentary on online
bullying, gives her a call.
Back
when we first met Jennifer, the text described the situation with her sister
only minimally, and it came up again in conversation with Axel a bit later. At
that point, Jennifer described it as her 15 year old sister having a crush on
an older boy. Some junior girls discovered this and made a fake Facebook page
for him, and started messaging her (as him) as if he liked her. Then they
printed out all the private messages and circulated them around school (which
seems like an unnecessary step—why not circulate them, y’know, on facebook?) When the boy found out, he
was a jerk, too, making things worse. Jennifer helped her sister get into a new
school.
“I had hoped she would
stay and fight through it, but she just wanted to get away. She’s at a new
school now and seems to have put it behind her”
(82).
Thirty
pages later, when Jennifer gets this phone call from Julia, she learns that her
little sister is not, indeed, settling in, but in fact hates her new school and
wants to go back to her old one. Her sister is conscientious enough that she’d
tried to talk her principal into giving Jennifer (who paid for the private
school) a partial refund on the tuition, although he’d refused, and has decided
to get a part-time job in order to pay Jennifer aback.
Jennifer’s
reaction is to refuse.
“I want you to attend a
school where you’ll be happy. Where you don’t have people whispering behind
your back” (114).
But
Julia insists and even, quite logically, explains that she’s over it and that
if she hadn’t freaked out, the school probably would have gotten over it
quickly.
The
first time I read this, I, in fact, misread it, thinking that here Julia was
claiming that Jennifer had forced her to go to a school she didn’t want. (She
does say “I know you would have liked to attend a school like this, but it’s
not for me” 114). Which would have irritated me as it would have meant either
the author forgot what she’d written earlier (that Jennifer wanted Julia to
stay and fight) or that Jennifer willfully misremembers the situation. Instead
it’s a bit more nuanced, which is good. It seems like Julia freaked out, along
with Jennifer being protective, and since then Jennifer has embraced the new
school thing. For example, she questions Julia on how she can get decent grades
“with the distraction of online gossip and negative cliques using social media
to wage a smear campaign?” (114) which … is not how I think you should be
chatting with a 15 year old. That reads a lot more like the pitch one throws to
financial backers of your social campaigning documentary…
And
speaking of documentaries, Jennifer even says she’s got a film project in the
works about this sort of thing and Julia panics and demands that Jennifer not
do the film. She insists she won’t be “one of [her] causes” (115).
So
this leaves Jennifer in a tizzy. But as readers, we know it also leaves an open
door for Jennifer to find a new project that will enable her to stay with Axel.
Because there’s only 30 pages of novel left, so we’ll have to wrap things up in
another 15 or so. She doesn’t get time to ponder the situation, however, as
Chelsea comes in, looking for coffee.
I’m
a little curious as to why a woman who works at the arena gift shop is
wandering into conference rooms in the practice rink looking for coffee, but
apparently she’s there a lot and knows where all the ingredients are. This
isn’t explained—it may just be something she’s picked up as a Magical Groupie
being allowed to go wherever she wants. Or maybe the author forgot that the
practice rink and arena are two separate things.
But
has Chelsea gotten her car back since it’s early the next morning? If so, where
are the other groupies? If not, how did she get here? Although she did say her
apartment is close to the rink, so okay, she could have walked. But if so, why
bother? Given the way she left things with Vincent a few hours before, and
having gotten no sleep, as she tells Jennifer in a moment, is this really a practice
her groupie-self needs to be at? Is she literally at every public practice?
Because if yes, that’s not being a groupie, that’s being a stalker.
(Also,
it just occurred to me one of the reasons why the author might have chosen to
create a fictional Philadelphia team instead of using the Flyers. The Flyers
don’t practice in Philadelphia, they practice in New Jersey. Of course, paying
the NHL for the rights to use “Flyers” probably had something to do with that,
too, but the book does reference the Stanley Cup and the NHL specifically,
unlike Body Check.)
Anyway,
Chelsea, despite the narrative assuring us earlier that she’s intensely
private, tells Jennifer that she had a misunderstanding with Vincent and that
they’ll not be a story for the documentary. This surprises Jennifer, having
seen them be all Displaying Public Affection on the plane the day before. This
leads to Chelsea asking rhetorically what if they just can’t get through all
the obstacles, and Jennifer is in agreement, given her own situation. So this
Scene of Woe and Angst closes the chapter.
I haven't commented much on this book, as I find its many plots extremely confusing, along with the fact that Blogger randomly refuses to let me comment. But I really wanted to say something about this team name thing, so I'll keep trying.
ReplyDeleteI'm not a lawyer (thank God) but it's my understanding that writers can use a real name for free as long as they are not negative. So, they can say, "We had coffee at Starbucks" but not "We had coffee at Starbucks and later died of food poisoning." Given that negatives have different interpretations, publishers insist on using fake team names, but self-publishers may not be so scrupulous. The other rationale is marketing, some writers like fake team names since they can sell a whole series about the team as well as creating their own team swag to give away or sell.
This has been a legal moment. We will now return to the regular reviewing.
I totally get the idea of an author wanting to create a team for many benefits (series/etc.) but I hadn't thought about the potential for libel. That makes sense. I still think it's odd, though, that she chose the Philadelphia Phantoms (since that was a real team, and it sort of still is. I know so, since although it's the Lehigh Valley Phantoms, I just saw them play in their new arena last week against Norfolk Admirals. The Phantoms won in shootout, after about 9 shooters each.)
DeleteOh! And this book isn't confusing! The hero is a Finnish, former motorcycle gang member turned NHL defensive goon via adoption by an American billionaire, who has fallen for a social-justice-activist documentary maker forced to film a hockey team so she can then make a documentary on cyberbullying. The hero's foster brother is an NHL offensive player dating a matchmaker who is the daughter of a former pop star. And their teammate is a rookie from a farm who has fallen for the team's biggest groupie, a formerly homeless woman who's afraid of relationships. ... OKay, it's a little confusing. ;)
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