Chapters 6 & 7: Sex &
Violence (well, Violence & Sex)
In
the aftermath of the bizarre, in my opinion, threat from the Destroyers biker,
the narrative switches to Jennifer’s perspective and she demands to know what’s
going on. Axel’s reaction is intriguing. He does, in fact, agree to tell her
the truth, albeit as long as she doesn’t share the information with the team,
but his tone is “cool, distant” (61). I know I’ve said this before, but I’m so
impressed that this book’s tension doesn’t depend upon missing information and
a refusal to communicate. Even though Axel is willing to share, things like his
tone of voice here still give him an interesting characterization. I haven’t
finished the book yet, so it all could fall apart, but this is how you write a
short romance properly, without the stupid refusal to talk to people.
Axel
explains that he was in the gang when he was a “teenage moron” (61) and that
they won’t like seeing his “lifestyle broadcast to twenty different countries
while they’re still scrapping over drug territories in Helsinki” (62). Which,
okay, but he never explains how the gang already knows about this
just-began-filming/hasn’t aired documentary. Nor why they’d wait for something
like the film to come back and want something from him when he’s already been
successful for a while and they clearly already know where he is (right down to
being in a rental car instead of the team bus on a way to the airport.
Apparently they injected him with a GPS chip or something?)
Jennifer
is shocked to learn that Axel had been in a gang, having envisioned hockey
players to have grown up in moneyed families who could drive them to games and
lessons and such. She’s not wrong in general. Hockey is expensive, especially for a kid where you have to buy new gear
every time the player grows a bit, on top of league fees and lessons and ice
time and gas for the car. Which is frankly why I still don’t understand how
Axel became a good enough player, while also being in a motorcycle gang, to end
up in the NHL.
Axel
doesn’t explain that mystery, but he does explain that he was 8 years old when
he began going to the clubhouse with his stepfather and running messages and
mystery packages possibly full of drugs, although the text makes clear that by
the time he was 11 he knew never to deliver packages, so this character is
still basically morally clean. And of course readers are meant to like him even
more when Jennifer exclaims that this documentary could be dangerous for him
but he’s more concerned that it could mean danger for her. Aww.
The
chapter ends here and the next one starts a Vincent scene, so I’m going to skip
ahead to the next Jennifer/Axel scene and come back to Vincent next post. The Montreal game has ended and Jennifer
is in her hotel room, thinking that she and Axel need to talk. She’s also
pondering what will happen to her reputation and potentially her career when
the scene of her kiss with Axel airs in three days.
…she did not want to be some decorative accessory on the arm of a successful
athlete. Big-time sports stars were notorious for womanizing and living large.
She didn’t want any part of the jet-set lifestyle with houses on both coasts
and a garage full of cars that were never driven more than two miles
(68, emphasis original).
Sure,
well paid professional athletes do that have that kind of reputation but I’d
guess hockey players less than most other professionals. And if she falls for
Axel, she’d be falling for an actual person, not the idea of an athlete, and I
would think that if he has that lifestyle it’d be symptomatic of other things
that Jennifer wouldn’t like about him. Besides, if she had his income, she
could make all the critically acclaimed, commercially terrible social justice
films she wanted. Just a thought.
Axel
comes to her room and despite having had a good game (including an assist on
the game-winning goal), he’s in a bad mood.
“I’m having the best season of my
career,” he admitted, though he seemed a little annoyed about it
(69).
Yes,
how terrible. But no, the annoyance is because he’s certain he’s going to mess
up the good thing by getting involved with Jennifer. Not, let me point out,
because of the resurgence of his old motorcycle gang. And the power of
attraction is so strong that he can’t do anything except kiss her.
After
this, it’s just a sex scene that takes a very long time to get the couple
naked. Since we’re at book three already, you may have noticed that I tend to
skip over the sex scenes. That’s because, much like car chase scenes, unless
the author does something particularly unusual, they’re just not that different
from each other, especiallyin mainstream, heterosexual romance. The only
thing particularly of note in this one is that Jennifer is concerned that she
doesn’t have a centerfold body (compared with Axel’s professional athlete body)
and he reassures her, completely enraptured by her beauty. There’s just a few
odd moments.
Who could be coherent with a naked
goddess skimming the front of his pants? (74)
Who
indeed, Axel? Who indeed?
When
Jennifer insists that he get naked, he tells her to be patient, then caves,
telling her she wins.
She released his pants to clutch the
condom, waving it over her head like a trophy.
“We both win!” she exclaimed,
unwrapping it while he shed his pants and his boxers. When her eyes dipped
south, she dropped the prophylactic. “But I really, really win” (74).
Ah
yes, the hero’s enormous penis trope.
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