Epilogue: Your Happily Ever After
Ain’t Mine
Epilogue
pregnancies, such as with Body Check,
are a common trope. Play the Man goes
with the other common epilogue trope: the epilogue wedding day. It turns out to
be the very most perfect day. There’s a whole bunch of internal monologuing from
Jenna about how she and Ryan have gotten through the very worst thing that
could ever happen to them and now they can celebrate.
We
learn that the Ryan and Nick’s friendship never recovered.
It didn’t hurt that Ryan had put a
target on his back and had taken him out at practice every chance he got (152).
This
strikes me as unlikely. Again, hearkening back to the many, many times I’ve
gone to watch the Coyotes practice, there is rarely much contact in practice.
Why would you risk injury skating against your own teammates? Besides which,
most practices are drills of various kinds—there isn’t room for taking out your
teammates. (Especially recently concussed ones.)
They certainly weren’t the best of
friends, but then again they weren’t before, either
(152).
Really,
novel? You’re going to re-rewrite history? What happened to the poor Ryan has
been cheated on by the TWO PEOPLE HE TRUSTED MOST? WAAAANNNHHH. Ugh.
Before
the ceremony, Alex shows up to give Jenna the bride gift. (Is this a traditional
thing? The best man gives a gift from the groom to the bride? Did not know
that.)
She opened the velvet box and found
a strand of flawless, white, seven-millimeter pearls
(153).
Alex,
being Alex, makes a pearl necklace sex joke, which, I know is totally in
character but kind of doesn’t fit the mood of the overall epilogue. Then the
narrative specifies that the necklace is a symbol, since Ryan bought something for
Jenna that better fits her style than his (unlike the engagement ring) but that
the engagement ring “complemented her finger” just as Ryan complements Jenna.
Overwrought, but it’s the conclusion to a romance novel so I’ll allow it.
But
where does this all leave our odd man out? Nick attends the wedding, mainly
because it would have been suspicious of him not to. He and Jenna have not
spent any time together since the affair. He expects to leave as soon as he can
congratulate the bride and groom, but then he meets Katie and they flirt and
dance. (“They stood close together, although not too close” (157). Apparently
Nick is leaving room for the Holy Ghost?) And the novel ends with the image of
Nick and Katie smiling at each other.
BUT!
That’s not the image I want to leave you with. Oh no, no, no. Instead, imagine
the toasts. Apparently the Blackhawks won the Stanley Cup two weeks before the
wedding, so they have it at the wedding reception for Ryan and Jenna to drink from.
Her mother had given her a plastic
poncho to wear, so Ryan wouldn’t spill any champagne on her wedding dress as he
lifted the giant silver Cup for her to sip from
(155).
Because
nothing says elegant wedding photos as a plastic poncho! I like to picture it as
one of the old-school Walt Disney World ones, where it’s BRIGHT YELLOW and has
a Mickey Mouse on the back. Happy wedding!
Some
final thoughts on Play the Man… It’s…
not great. I mean, I was genuinely surprised that Jenna stayed with Ryan, and
being surprised by the outcome in a romance novel is pretty rare, I’ll give it
that. I don’t like that Nick, though, is less of a character then and more of a
tool for fixing the initial relationship. (And I use "fixing" here only in the sense that the couple stayed together, not that I think it is a healthy, stable, or enviable relationship that has had any of its major flaws attended to.)
I found the book incredibly repetitive, full of unnecessary and monotonous recitation of characters’ thoughts. I despised the perspective jumping. It was irritating, unnecessary, and frankly I thought it was a symptom of an inexperienced writer as opposed to a carefully thought through choice. I can only hope that that’s something the author chose not to employ in future novels, because it was whiplashingly awful. I didn’t like any of the characters, frankly, so it’s hard to say much of anything else about the book because for me, personally, characters are pretty much the most important thing.
I found the book incredibly repetitive, full of unnecessary and monotonous recitation of characters’ thoughts. I despised the perspective jumping. It was irritating, unnecessary, and frankly I thought it was a symptom of an inexperienced writer as opposed to a carefully thought through choice. I can only hope that that’s something the author chose not to employ in future novels, because it was whiplashingly awful. I didn’t like any of the characters, frankly, so it’s hard to say much of anything else about the book because for me, personally, characters are pretty much the most important thing.
Come back Monday for FHL's third book, another Harlequin Blaze. The pace is far superior and it's a book full wild improbabilities! Fun!
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