Chapter Five: Return from Edmonton
The team’s plane had landed at
O’Hare on time, and the boys were being shuttled back to the arena to be
reunited with their families. It didn’t make a lot of sense to Jenna that it
worked that way, but she concluded that it meant the players didn’t have to
worry about parking at the airport (35).
This
is quite possibly true. However, I know it is not, in fact, the case for the
Coyotes who fly in and out of a private airport (not Phoenix SkyHarbor) and
park their cars at the private lot. (Fans met them at the airport after an
important game. A lot of the players had carpooled together, but there was no
bus.)
Nick
gets off the bus first. The text isn’t sure what he’s doing, though since at
the beginning of one paragraph he “didn’t bother to look around” because he
knows he isn’t being met by anyone and at the end of that paragraph he “scanned
the crowed” looking for Jenna (35). I suspect that the narrative starts this
way in order to make us feel sorry for Nick, although he does not feel sorry
for himself, but to also hint at the feelings and connection that Nick has for
Jenna.
By
the end of Nick’s scene here in the parking lot, that hint blossoms. Jenna
complains that Ryan still won’t set a date with her for the wedding, and
off-handedly tells Nick, “I wish Ryan were more like you. Marrying you would be easy” (37 emphasis
original). This comment is enough to send Nick into a dream world where Jenna
is his fiancée, waiting for him after roadtrips and going home with him, having
a home with her.
It sounded… wonderful. Suddenly, he
wanted that. He wanted her (37
emphasis original).
He
lets himself enjoy the moment for only a moment, in that he considers how
similar they are and why they get along so well. For a while in this book, I
feared that Nick’s job would be to make Ryan realize what he’s messing up with
Jenna. However, since Nick is actually thinking about her as a person, as
someone with whom he gets along with because of “their personalities, their
senses of humor, their mannerisms… they truly enjoyed each other’s company”
(37), I’m hoping that he really is the hero. (If Ryan is actually the hero? I
will be an angry, angry critic.)
By
a page later, Nick has recalled all the reasons he cannot crush on Jenna—that
she’s the fiancée of the captain, crushing on a teammate’s girlfriend is
inappropriate, and that he, Nick, also has to set a good example for the team
since he’s an alternate captain. Still, this doesn’t keep Nick from thinking
negatively as Ryan gets off the bus and proceeds to continue to push off
talking about setting the wedding date.
The
scene switches to Ryan and Jenna, where she drives him home and tries to get
him to talk about setting a date but all he wants is sex and sleep (in that
order). She finally plays the “Do you want to marry me, really?” card and he
reassures her and even sets a date for June.
Jenna smiled. “You mean it this
time?”
“Absolutely,” he said, happy to see
her elated expression. This was all it took to make her happy?
I’m
not sure I can articulate precisely what pisses me off about this line. Like,
he’s deigning to do something for her and it’s okay because it’s such an easy
thing. It’s patronizing and annoying and I’m ready for Ryan to just stay in the
penalty box, whether there’s a game going on or not.
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