Chapter Three: Post-Coital Day
Darcy
checks in with her best friend as Hayden’s driving across Chicago to meet her
father at a Warriors game. (You can see where that’s going, right?) And she
insists on knowing “How many?” How many what? Well, orgasms. You always demand
to know how many orgasms your best friend had during her most recent one night
stand, right? Of course you do! The answer is “Five,” and Darcy is shocked.
“Five!” Darcy went silent for a
moment. Then she offered an awe-laced
obscenity. “You’re telling me the hunk gave you five orgasms last night?”
(32 emphasis original).
What
I don’t understand about her surprise is that the narrative flat out told us
that Darcy has emailed Hayden in the past to tell her that she had seven
orgasms in one night. In the battle of the orgasms, Darcy is still winning.
It’s not like she thought women being multi-orgasmic was a myth, given she has
personally experienced a seven-climax night.
During
Darcy’s interrogation of Hayden, we also learn that in the morning (after the
wake-up sex), Brody wanted Hayden’s number but she refused to give it to him
(although she did accept his.) Of course, it’s not like he doesn’t know where
she’s staying.
When
Darcy criticizes Doug (the off-again boyfriend back in California) again,
Hayden takes time out to admit that “maybe his comparison of sex to a bridge
was bizarre” (32). I mention this only because a few sentences later we get the
following:
And somehow the words sleeping with Brody seemed unsuitable,
as if they described a bland, mundane event like tea with a grandparent
(33 emphasis original).
Methinks
bringing up grandparents in the same sentence as sex with the super hunk is a
mistake, even if you’re using it as a contrast. Also, the closeness of these
sentiments makes me wonder if the author is entirely comfortable with her own
use of analogies/descriptions.
At
any rate, Hayden spends the rest of her drive to the arena wondering if she’d
made the right choice to keep the sex no strings attached and lamenting the
fact that she now has to spend the night “watching sweaty men skating after a
black disk” (35). (Considering that as I write this I’m waiting for a ride to
go watch prospects scrimmage, because I’m that desperate for hockey, I don’t
sympathize with poor Ms Hayden. Of course, Hayden’s distaste for the sport when
we as readers know the man she’s falling for (and she is falling for him
because this is a Harlequin) is one of those “sweaty men” is simply dramatic
irony.)
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